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Wise Cat



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PostSubject: Exceed   Sat Jun 26, 2010 12:40 pm

Name
Exceed

Characteristics
Exceed takes the form of a small cat. They aren't usually very muscular but there are some different ones. Cat's have advanced legs which allow them to walk like humans. Normally they have very good hand coordination aswell. Their skin is pinkish but it is always covered with fur. The fur color can vary, it can be every color. Exceed have rather long and powerful tails, some of them use their tails in battle.
Exceed are born from eggs which shape and design can vary.

-Example of two Exceeds
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Special Abilities
Exceed are able to grow wings on their back. It is a special technique available to their race and they call it "Aera". The more powerful the Exceed is the more bigger and powerful wings he/she can grow.

Exceed also have very powerful tails which have special abilities. They are able to extend their tail to a certain length and then use it for fighting or grabbing something. Tail is very important in Exceed religion. If a cat has lost it all other cats will look down on him and banish the one from their home place.

The range exceed can grow their tail.
D - 5 Meters
C - 15 Meters
B - 30 Meters
A - 40 Meters
S - 50 Meters


Exceed can talk and learn magic, their magical power is even higher than humans and a lot other races.

Exceed have very long life, younger ones reaching at least 300 years. Although their life spawn is quite big they will still learn to talk and acting like a grown up on their very first year.

Origin
The Exceed come from their homeland "Extalia" which resides on clouds. They think that they are better than other races and thus not many cats come down to Dragonia, thinking that they are only fit to live in Extalia. They also think themselves as Angels because of their ability to grow wings and fly. About three years ago 100 eggs were taken from their parents and sent down on earth so they would spy on other races, the message was transferred to them telepathically after they had hatched. Exceed secretly plan on taking over the world.

Special Stats
For every 5 points Exceed puts into Magic the score increases by additional 1, but their starting SP are cut to 35.

Other Notes
N/A



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PostSubject: Re: Exceed   Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:24 pm

I'm not really sure about your species. Like the special stat thing. Oh. And your species can't be the only race that grows wings. "Exceed are able to grow wings on their back. It is a special technique only available to their race and they call it "Aera". The more powerful the Exceed is the more bigger and powerful wings he/she can grow."

So take off the "only availble to their race" thing. And the rest I'll leave up to lightning and Death.

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PostSubject: Re: Exceed   Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:41 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Exceed   Sat Jun 26, 2010 2:05 pm

Such a powerful special property can't be allowed without any penalties to balance it out. You can pick one of these:

1) For every 10 points
Exceed puts into Magic the score increases by additional 1.

2)
For every 5 points Exceed puts into Magic the score increases by additional 1, but their starting SP are cut to 35.


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PostSubject: Re: Exceed   Sat Jun 26, 2010 10:21 pm

Death suggested 35. I wouldve said 25. But I guess it's approved unless she says otherwise.

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PostSubject: Re: Exceed   Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:30 pm

We'll see how this goes, Mebu. Doing something wrong is better than not doing anything at all. And all that.

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