Lunar Storm

Account Name: Luna


Name: Lunar Storm
Nickname: Luna or Storm
Age: 15
Race: Human
Gender: female
Height: 6.2 ft tall
Weight: 156 pounds
Reputation: +10
Class: D
Affiliation: light

Physical Description: She has bluish silver hair and crystal blue eyes. She has lean, wiry muscles built for endurance and speed. Her frame is lean. She has pale skin without freckles and pointed ears.
Clothing: She has 4 outfits she wears. One is a white dress with blue ribbons, two is a solid blue dress with several parterns on it , three is a outfit of a blue tunic, and pants, and four is a solid black leather outfit made up of a shirt and pants. She wears either brown leather boots or black leather boots with all her outfits.
Accessories: None yet
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Personality She is mostly a loner that keeps to herself. If you manage to befriend her she will fight beside you and protect you. She has a kind heart and will help those she sees in trouble if they need it. If someone becomes her enemy they better beware for she doesn't go easy on them and will fight against them. She has a independent nature to her and won't let anyone hold her down.

History She was abandoned as a child and she has lived alone since she was merely 2 years old. She somehow managed to survive and she grew up in a unknown forest. When she got older she somehow managed to obtain a sword. She has a bow and quiver filled with arrows that she made herself. When she turned 15 she decided to leave her forest home and search for a dragon to learn what one could teach her.

Weaponry a blue sword that she calls Dragon's Fire [D], a blue dagger [D] and a bow with a quiver filled with arrows [D]


Stats - 90
Strength: 15 (13+2)
Accuracy: 17 (15+2)
Stamina: 14 (10+2)
Speed: 36 (30+6)
Magic: 10 (20)

Stat Points Earned: 0/45
Scales Earned 200,000/1,400,000

Sources
Meeting [Kai & Zarora & Lunar] - 3 SP

Exterminate Obadoro - 8 SP; 400,000 Scales

Beating Basics Into You - 2 SP

Wrom Hunting! - 9 SP; 250,000 Scales

Uncontrollable Things are a Pain - 2 SP; 50,000 Scales

Bye All! - 4 SP; 200,000 Scales

Market Day - 10 SP; 100,000 Scales

Grandpa's Sight - 2 SP; 100,000 Scales

The Lost Brothers - 5 SP; 200,000 Scales

Magic Name: Fire Controller
Magic Tier: 2
Magic Type: Fire
Rank: 2
Magic Description: She can start a small flame and control her own fire. The flame she creates she can either make it grow slowly by herself or faster by giving it something to burn (branch, grass, ect.). She can control others fire at rank 5. She can only control dragon fire when this magic is Rank 10. This magic also allows her to keep from being burned even if she cannot control the fire.
Techniques: (5/7)

Fire Controller - 2
Type: Hybrid
Range: Self or Ranged
Effect: With this technique Lunar can control fire. She often finds it easier to use her hands to control fire but can use just her mind if she tries.

Phoneix Fire Transform - 2
Type:
Supportive
Range: Self
Effect:
Luna can slowly transform herself into a harpie-like phoneix (a.k.a. claws, feathered arms, on fire, ect.) by warping fire around herself. The fire can act as solid as what it's being warped into, such as claws and feathers. She can't transform fast or fly far, but the more this technique ranks up the faster she transforms and the farther she can fly.

Liquid Fire - 1
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Effect: When she slashs a opponent, she can send small amounts liquidfied fire through the wound to cause them pain. This is not lethal and only works for a short amount of time unless she slashs again and if she does it will be weaker than the one before it. The stronger this technique gets the longer it lasts.
Points Spent: unknown

Misc

House:
Companion: Starlight

Theme Song:

Well, Your stats are little off. Magic stat increases by putting 2 stat points in it so it should be 5 (10) for you.

Also, for the Fire Controller. Let's make it that at first you can control normal magic and the fire made by you. Starting from 5 your can control other's fire magic and maybe from 10 your can start controlling Dragon's as they are very powerful and magical creatures.

You can have 2 techniques at first. If you don't have the techniques you can't do anything with your magic.
If you make 2 techniques you must fill the technique slot as (2/2) and if you make one then (1/2).

Now then I would also like you to write more personality and history, just a little more, like did she have parents, any friends, something dramaticall happened in her childhood etc.

Also the Affiliation on top of the template should be Light, Dark or Neutral. If you still can't decide then choose Neutral as you can go over to other side while role playing.

ok did I fix it?

I modified your technique, so it would look like it should be.

You are still missing Affiliation.

Also is your magic Fire Controler because Controller is writed with double l.

ok if the changes saved this time I think I fixed it

ok thanks ^_^